Evaluation Of My Video Pre Lim

Here is the video I uploaded for my evaluation of my film. I think I could have improved it a lot if I had edited it and wrote my script clearer. But as it was my first attempt and I managed to upload it to the Internet its not too bad. 

Film Prelim Task

We were given the task of creating a short film which included these 3 things;

1. Match on action
2. Shot reverse shot
3.Keeping to the 180 degree rule.

We had to film and edit a character opening a door, crossing the room and sitting down in a chair opposit another character. They have to then exchange a couple of lines of dialogue.